(1) In this scene

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16. Do not let the characters gossip chat: to make out the dialogue has its purpose (to promote the story? Establish the role of personality?, Etc.).

17. Do not let the role of dialogue too fancy colors: plain can approach close to write dialogue, do not use a wide range of colloquial slang.

18. Do not forget the feeling of the role: the use of the role of thoughts, feelings, feelings to create a role that can be understood by the reader.

19. Do not be afraid to use, "said ... ..." (this one I have not read, do not know ....)

20. Do not think you know everything of course, go to Prove: Even a small mistake could make or break your heart to the reader of degrees.

21. Do not stop observing and taking notes: the use of observations at any time to exercise their own narrative technique.

22. Do not ignore the scene structure: (1) In this scene, the main role to achieve the immediate goals?

(2) Write down goals.