Friday, November 12, 2010

Useless or meaningless advice


26. Do not worry that the Bai: Make sure your work is very clear and strong, will not let your readers scratching it out.

27. Do not selfcriticism to die: Let free play of creative thinking.

28. Never mind your mother how to: Feel free to create, do not control the outside world how to think.

29. Do not hide your feelings: Do not suppress their feelings, readers want to feel is the author is passion and emotion.

30. Do not brought to the club (vegetable market) looking for advice: Avoid unnecessary, useless or meaningless advice.

31. Do not ignore the opinions of experts:

32. Do not chase the market:

33. Do not put a high profile and: Do not put your own works or cynical (like what the Japanese like corruption ah)

34. Do not waste your idea (plot): Please give a small idea in the story all the possibilities, not disposable.

35. Do not hastily Finish: The way to avoid: (1) finished after the first break.

(2) Check the story: Is there space restrictions so whom you want to end? Based on your story outline to go? ... ....

(3) good story to read again from the beginning: Do not repair while being read, as long as the change in behalf of the Department for marking, you can cite a possible

solution (preferably a change in the environment, to work outside the table read.)

(5) design the conflict between these two roles


(3) noted elsewhere in this scene with the problems, and note the problem has been solved.

(4) when the target is confirmed, the role of the contrary into another position and a second person.

(5) design the conflict between these two roles.

(6) wrote that scene.

(7) (plot) King to write bad, because the issues raised by this scene, did not get good answers.

23. Do not throw the crocodile from the transom (not suddenly flying a day outside, do not conflict, conflict): keep up an interesting story about the event.

24. Do not forget the role you think: Please provide, "according to their emotional, thinking after the judge is decision" makes you the story of his role in the

pursuit of goals.

25. Do not mist looked out: the story of the decision to you, and hold on tight.

(1) In this scene


on.

16. Do not let the characters gossip chat: to make out the dialogue has its purpose (to promote the story? Establish the role of personality?, Etc.).

17. Do not let the role of dialogue too fancy colors: plain can approach close to write dialogue, do not use a wide range of colloquial slang.

18. Do not forget the feeling of the role: the use of the role of thoughts, feelings, feelings to create a role that can be understood by the reader.

19. Do not be afraid to use, "said ... ..." (this one I have not read, do not know ....)

20. Do not think you know everything of course, go to Prove: Even a small mistake could make or break your heart to the reader of degrees.

21. Do not stop observing and taking notes: the use of observations at any time to exercise their own narrative technique.

22. Do not ignore the scene structure: (1) In this scene, the main role to achieve the immediate goals?

(2) Write down goals.

To understand the internal point of view the role of ideas and action motivation


ide world, to understand the internal point of view the role of ideas and action motivation. This way, you can let the reader know the role of the idea of what a

person he is.

For example, Bob on the idea of this speech is the fear? Fear? Arrogant? Proud? Bob is response time are reflected by his personality. A description of fixed and

stressed the point of view, the problem can be reduced, so that the story is more like the real world, your role and make the reader have empathy. In addition, you can

point the reader to understand the role of a real face. Because in his heart, the role is no need to lie and cheat their own.

On the point of view to be careful not to run away so casually. Bob is still the point assumed the role, and you want to show his boss Max worried about Bob is speech,

you will not worry about a speech by Max 〔〕, because when we look at it from Max is point of view. In contrast, you can 〔podium when he went to when Bob thought of

this talk concerns Max〕 〔as to speech or Taiwan, Bob feared to write, see faces covered〕 Max. No matter which argument, we can provide information for readers to

know Max worried, but views are still concentrated in Bob body. Because the narrative point of view is very important for writing a story, then how do you train

yourself to remain fixed it narrative point of view?

To find a few pages to write your own novel, the character name in outlook red pen (a), drawn lines, each sentence out of a role in winning the view (such as he saw,

she thought, he heard, he felt She tried to go). See if there is a second point of view, if there is found, marked with a green pen name of the character (b), then

each sentence as successful in the role of the b point of view (see, think, hear ....) If found to have more than two views, if necessary, rewrite, to maintain a

single view.

Learn how to master the point of view of fiction writing is very important. If unable to take advantage of views, your readers will forget what this is story, and you

will forget! ! !

14. Do not preach to your readers: Please say something with a more meaningful, more creative ways to say.

15. Do not let your character is preaching to readers: Do not let the white background into a clumsy explanati

You have to become Bob


e point of view, in the short cartoon, not the protagonist who is not eligible for a lot of inner box it ^ ^.

13. Do not let the fuzzy point of view. Suppose now to write the story of Bob, before you decided to view his role, how do you make sure his point of view?

When you write the story, you have to become Bob, you can only see what he saw and heard what he heard, that to his knowledge, feeling his feelings, addition of as no

more intelligence. When Bob enters a room, he will first feel the sultry air, noting the sea of faces blurred, and then think "I want to convince you that I thought

was right." As you described, you can not only view your role to link with real life, but also let you create more easily. You do not worry about Sally Gansha in the

next room, and Bob worried about unrelated things can be ignored. Bob is reaction to concentrate and do your best to keep Bob is experience in this scene, vivid sense.

Next, let the reader know that this is sustained the point of view things from Bob. The use of grammar skills to understand the idea of Bob feels. Instead of using

"speech in the meeting room was crowded with" better use "Bob felt bored around the temperature around him, learned that he had to deliver a good speech, good to keep

the audience is enthusiasm." I could only Bob feel and understand their own. So readers know Bob look through the view, and then locked in Bob is perception.

Professional writers through the external environment (heat, the crowds) and the point of view (Bob) are combined and constructed a [result>; [Fruit>; connected by

Bob point of view, to understand Bob inner thoughts. Through the perspective of the role by observing the outs

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

But it is impossible to allow him to start Living


Stood up, "how to dance?"
Today Murong Kam drink more wine, so unwittingly removed the weekdays too cold.
Cooling off his hand on his shoulder, put the jump national standard position.
Although he did not skip, but in the clear guidelines, in nearly stepped on a few feet after the clear. He may find a feeling, very relaxed together, accompanied by melodious music that rotation, he gently whispers in the clear ears, "Where did you learn this particular dance?"
The clear soft smile, "I did not come before that to learn." Yes, everything seems to have had a past life thing.
Murong lug Kam Ying Road eyebrow slightly, "You really have a lot of the little village something special ah!" He remembers telling him the clear, even the names she was not from a small mountain village.
Sharp contact with these days as he had already noticed his distinctive, and she like a mystery, he wanted to solve, but it is impossible to allow him to start Living.
Shang Yuan Night ③
The clear laugh, just the smile, a touch of sadness hidden, she desperately rotation, until the eyes of the countless stars in the flash.
Murong and shoved her into the arms of Jin, "do not turn."
So warm up his chest, in the first cold weather seems to block out discount louboutin all the cold attacks.
The clear that whispered, "If you Fang Shaoqi how good!"
Her voice is very light fall Murong Kam is ear, he asked some of the clear road of uncertainty, "the clear, you say? You consort prince?"
The clear heart of a fierce fight Jiling, round, then road, "ah, as it does have a wedding so wonderful!"
She was paralyzed by alcohol brain do not know what to say Murong Jin will not believe it, but really, how much she is looking forward to have a wedding of their own, perhaps, which it called the wine there is truth!
It seems that this is already the second time tonight to show the clear on this wedding envy, how a prince can marry tw

On the boats that


ear.
Some of the cold wind blowing the cheeks, the clear is pleased shouted, "Come again!"
Murong Kam So to see her so excited, "You sit tight." Shoved a flattering shares.
Horse will Sahuan the running.
The kind of stimulation like in drag racing, the clear immersed in this stimulation were dizzy.
She was excited, laughing.
Murong Jin have never seen such a cooling off, then smile as bright without the slightest hidden.
Far we can see the Golden Water Bridge on the brightly lit lanterns which beacon rising slowly, and that bridge has been decorated lanterns, and countless men and women young and small Ai lake in the above wish.
Jin will be the clear dismounted Murong hold back, pulling her to the river walk, the clear front of some vague, as if in a dream in general.
Yuet Wah first time, the moon reflected in water, blue waves, blending a pool of pure light, little pale ice broken mirror first, and if the collections of diamond pieces flash. Shore stop there a floating restaurant, discount louboutin brightly lit, if shaped like a golden dragon boats, magnificent. The wind gently lifted the layers of Man Zhang, are like soar. Pavilion secretly hidden away the trees were lightly coated with a layer of silver moon light, blurry.
Just listen to someone shouting, "Block dragon boat on the lake, and seats are limited ah!"
Shang Yuan Night ②
Murong Jin looked at the clear channel, "or go by boat?"
At this time the people still in the clear excitement, a bit childish nodded, "Good!"
Drunk and always very different from the clear, remove the weekdays in the calm and cool.
The clear,d like more of the cute cute.
And he took her on board Murong Kam, and then took out a gold from her boatman on that road, "Tonight I pack a dragon boat on this."
The price is very objective nature, that nature is very respectful to people who went up the boat.
On the boats that, in that fine seat seated, the waiter will end on the fresh fruit and pastries,
At this point, Fang Musicians on the lively also played "Clouds Chasing the Moon", and gradually boats and row to the lake.
Stuck his head out to see the clear that moving far from the shore save shrouded in misty bloom crowd, her heart is still fluttering sway.
She pulled Murong Kam, "we dance!"
Murong Kam surprised a moment, but elated to see her like this pair will be also in accordance with her.

The clear clear some would think


The clear is waved, "I want to drink."
Lingding drunk she just want to drink, do not want to present these things.
Sort of coaxed her Murong Kam Road, "the clear, you,re drunk, listen to sweet-scented osmanthus drink hangover and Xiang Lu and delicious!" If the women of his usual, which is also the coax him so, but just this stubborn never eat a small woman like his strength.
The clear drank that delicious sweet osmanthus Xiang Lu, her face looked Murong Kam is a bit fuzzy or Murong Jin Fang Shaoqi tell is, it seems that they both coincide to together.
Banquet finally dispersed, in speaking of his mouth Murong Kam Meng Meng drunk the clear, "we return to the government it!"
The clear channel is childish, "No, no, I,m going to the bridal chamber!" She was really drunk.
Murong Jin looked at her face scarlet, a Push arm dragging her waist and stood up.
The clear weight of the entire body of the pressure in the Murong Kam that one arm.
Out of the hall, the cool wind hit in the face, the clear clear some would think, is to hold her Murong Kam to the cart.
But christian louboutin shoes on sale the clear role of the liquor power is against him, "I want to ride!"
With a hint of a smile Murong Kam Road, "Good!"
He is such a small request to meet her.
Shang Yuan Night ①
Jin will be the clear Murong onto his horse, and he then also on the horse, the carriage all the way slowly as the line of toffee.
It sat in the carriage on horseback Queshi Bi more carefree.
Cooling off the road there are many boys and girls see the hands are holding lanterns, and others took their lit lanterns.
So ask Murong Kam Road side head, "they are going to do?"
Murong Kam, "you forget today is still edge section."
Only think of it to listen to the clear duck said, this festival the young men and women less Ai wish forged harmonious union in the lake.
Murong see the clear for a long time without a word Kam just stared at the lantern in hand, the people, so Road, "or we have to go south of the Golden Water Bridge to see."
The clear nod of her head because of the role of alcohol, especially the excitement, but also because the wedding was attended Fang Shaoqi and particularly repression, both felt her heart intertwined mess.
Murong Kam horse carriage window to announce his drive into the toffee with a cry they rode towards the south of the cl